This week I had learned many new things especially about making an outline for an essay. This year I had made 2 outlines which were about Cyberbullying and about why people should come visit Thailand. As you can see below it's an outline for cyber bullying. I had learned that it also called Ket, Pim, and Poppy which I had not known it before. It was really fun to learn!
Cyberbullying was a really bad thing to do. Cyberbullying can happen in any way whether in social media, verbal, and etc. It could cause depression or other more serious mental health problems, hurt their feelings, and they will not trust in others.
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Main Reason 1 (Ket) Main Reason 2 (Pim) Main Reason 3 (Poppy)
Depression or other more serious mental health problems
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Low self-esteem
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Hurt people feeling
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Facts/Examples Facts/Examples Facts/Examples
- Depression would usually happen with a teenage which was about 12 to 18 years old.
-Sometimes when they get too much depression it can cause to suicide.
-Depression may happen through social media
+Pictures
+Words
-If its face to faces bullying, it maybe is double the risk of depression.
-Depression could cause to mental health problems.
-For people who get bully, they will remember those words that they had heard and get really serious about it.
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-People who get bullied would totally have low self-esteem
-Low self-esteem is kind of like depression.
-They will have no confidence which also listed in low self-esteem.
+People who get bully through word or through pictures, they will start getting losing their confidence.
-People who get bully will be hypersensitivity which was when they think that other people all think in the same ways.
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-Bullying is totally hurting people's feeling.
-They will get the really bad feeling and feel like they shouldn’t be a part of something they were doing that time.
-They could probably be crying but they're not outside but truly inside they were crying and thinking why would they be in this school or maybe on this planet!
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Conclusion
In conclusion, cyber bullying shouldn’t be happening in school and it shouldn’t be happening outside school too. As you see cyber bullying could cause depression and other more serious mental health problems, hurt other people's feelings, and they will have low self-esteem. From all of this evidence and reasons, cyber bullying shouldn’t be happening.
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