"Why? Mom! I don't want to go learn there where they were many different types of people!" I indignant at my mother face! Many people said to my mother that, "You know my daughter went to England and learned there for summer school!" That made my mother's mind change from letting us go to Japan and having fun together changed to forced me to go to England for summer school."Which school is it?" I asked.
"Not sure!" My mother answered back with a serious face. It made me felt a little bit wanted to go now.
"Can I go and have fun at Japan?" I asked her again. "NO" this word came through in my mind that my mother would say this.
"No!" my mother shouted. I needed to go learn for summer school at England in July for 1 month! In July, people in Ruamrudee International School usually go somewhere on Earth such as America, Japan, or Korea!
"Sunny, please can you help me one more time?" my mother said to me. With my eyes looking at my mother's face it made me felt 100 percent wanted to go.
"Okay!" I shouted back to her. I didn't know that why I said the word okay! Is it good? Is it safe? Is it fun? All these questions came up through my mind again.
"I going to call you everyday!" My mom told me, this made me felt more happier.
I really liked how you used the vocabulary words for our Lightning Thief right now. I also liked how you punctuated dialogue correctly and telling your inner thoughts. I think your best sentence in this slice of life was "In July, people in Ruamrudee International School usually go somewhere on Earth such as America, Japan, or Korea!". I think this sentence is the best because it sounded smooth and also gave specific evidence like what school, and where. And also, it is a complete sentence, not too many ideas but this is just one idea.
ReplyDeleteGood job!