"What?" JJ responded back to that Chinese guy. We were in Bounce Thailand where many people talked about it. There were black, blue, and pink rectangular trampolines throughout a large gym. Many people were jumping on the trampoline but we were playing dodge ball on our own individual trampoline.
"Calm down bro!" Jay B. said to JJ. That Chinese guy stopped and kept playing the same as JJ. We finished one round then, we needed to go line up but suddenly,
"You have a problem in the game?" the Chinese guy said with a lazy face in front of JJ's face. That time JJ said something and I couldn't hear it but finally, I heard some bad words from the Chinese dude. That word made JJ felt mad like his instagram name "Madbro_JJ"
"Nozomu sing that song." JJ shouted. First thought that came through in my mind was it going to make that Chinese dude mad. Nozomu started to sing a Te song, my prediction was correct that
Chinese dude got very mad that it made him said many bad words out loud. Everybody gawk.
"Come in!" the staff said. JJ made a plan that let throw the ball at the Chinese dude first. When the game started not just when I breathe in, that Chinese dude shouted something out again. JJ got very mad that he said, "Let's go play another court." we all agreed, we walked together to the another court. JJ, Asia, Nick, Kenny, Jay B, Titi, Nozomu, Dena, Fourth, Jinseok, Captain, and me we were all having fun time together.
"Next time where will you guys go?" My mother asked.
Sunny, I really like how you have a lot of dialogue, and you also described the setting very well, and I also liked that you have the picture to go with it too. Maybe you can have some more description of the Chinese guy, so we know more about the Chinese guy, but it was already good that you have a picture of the setting.
ReplyDeleteWell done punctuating your dialogue well. I also like how you included the setting and a picture!
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