Monday, January 11, 2016

LA Reflection 2

     I learned how to write an article perfectly with author's purpose, point of view, PEEL, OREO, Mood+Tone and figurative language for examples simile, metaphor, hyperbole, and personification. Especially, I learned how to write it in my own words with not copying from others.  My topic for writing an article was Cyberbullying. My thoughts in this project are it pretty good for me but I don't know if it good for Ms.Erin but, whether it's good or not it still my best writing ever for me. I have a feeling that it hard to write all those beginning, ending, or either new things from Ms.Erin. I don't know how to write a opinion with 3 different reasons and explanation and I don't know many words that will get the reader to read it. Ms.Erin came and helped me for all those new vocabulary so now from feeling that it's hard I'm feeling more better and fun. You can click here to look at my article.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/148SouYnnzUtgbcm1z2UJdN-Q3pwMUK-yk3m2kR5RfF0/edit
It was good to learned new things from teachers and it also good to learned new things from our friends. Sometimes I asked Namphueng that what should I put here instead of the word help or what pictures should I put it in here that related to my article. Learning from others are the best. Nothing that I felt bad. Surely, I can use what I learned now in the future! If I need to write more article in the future I can use this ideas in and I think it will come out excellently.

2 comments:

  1. You really have improved on your writing both narrative(story) and researched based writing! You are a reflective and hard working student and that will lead to more successes in the second semester.

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  2. I really liked how your explained it really well and give a lot of examples on what you have learnt. It is really easy to understand.

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