"Wow it's very yummy" My friend said behind me. We were eating Pudkrapuo with yellow fried egg, everyone were talking and laughing. In my head, there were a million questions to ask my friends and the guide. How far are we now? Is it close to the way out? Will we see some animals? Do we need to do the work in our journal? How long are we had to stay in the forest? This all man
y questions made me curious about it, suddenly the tree shaking and some leaves falling down like a snow! Everybody stayed quiet and looked on top, we saw a Black Gibbons. We were so happy to see the gibbons climbing all around the trees like Tarzan. We were all happy because it was the first animal we saw in the rainforest! Finally it's gone. I took some pictures but it was very bad.. Stayed in the rainforest was harder than I thought. We needed to stay calm, quiet, and always think smart before we do something. I t was pair of lest socks, one backpack, and one dirty shoes.
"Wow first animal that I see in this forest!" I said to Namphueng
"Yeah." Namphueng said back.
My group was the first group to walk through the rainforest, we got 1 paper each and for me I got the paper about Barking Deer. We walked and walked and this time we walked up to the top of the mountain. Finally we stopped, we stopped before we going to walked down to get out from this rainforest! We far from the other group so we stopped and work on our journal and have fun but,
"How we going to go through?" I asked
"It very slippery be careful and be careful of all the unsteady rock!" The guide said. BAMM! one person behind me slipped down. I started to fall down but wow I stand on the rock now. Another thing I need to do is breathe and breathe don't be excited just go through it. "Don't be scared before I do something," I thought. When I close my eyes wow, I was out from the rainforest! Hike one time in your life you will know it very fun!
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you had a picture to go with your slice of life, and I also liked the way how you had a lot of dialogue and made it more interesting. But I think you should work on some of the grammar mistakes. Well, I wanted to see a gibbon too, but I didn't.
ReplyDeleteWell done Sunny! It sounds like the hike was challenging but fun. I like how you added dialogue and description details.
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