Students should not be allowed to leave school property for lunch!
Introduction :
Imagine if some students go out from school for lunch and something happens to the students…… who is going to be responsible for this problem? It’s the teachers. Do you want that to happen? :( Every country, they’re having so many criminals that steal children and sell them. I know how sad and angry you will feel right now. Criminals are stealing kids and cutting their legs, arms, head and other parts of their body! If this happened to your child, how would you feel? And most of all, if one of your family members are hurt or dead, how would you feel?
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First of all, the students can have accidents on the road!!! If that happened to some of your members of your family how would you feel? Sometimes, the students need to cross the road to go to a restaurant, but the road that they are going to cross has no cross walk. So, they need to figure it out by themselves when they need to cross the road. For example, your child is about to go to Mcdonald and it is very close but it was in the opposite side so, your child need to cross the road by themselves with no crosswalk. And they think that now it’s safe to cross the road so they quickly run through but suddenly 2 cars and 1 motorcycle come in opposite way. One car saw the child run through but they couldn’t stop because they were driving so fast. They then quickly switched to another lane and thus crashed into another car, BOOM! One motorcycle was coming quickly from behind and couldn’t see the child. So when he did a U-turn, he crashed into the child. CRASHHHH!!!!!!! Your child and another 3 person died because of one wrong decision. It’s not good. How would you and the parents of the person that died feel? Now, Although some people may still think that they should let the students leave school for lunch but in reality however, we should not let students leave school for lunch.
THe Website: http://www.thompsons.law.co.uk/road-traffic-accidents/road-traffic-accidents-involving-pedestrians.htm retrieved on 11 Feb 2015 stated that, The judge concluded that the driver must have been driving too fast or failing to keep a proper lookout. The driver was found to be 75% responsible for the accident.
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Secondly the students could go out of school grounds, drink some alcohol and may not returned to school. One of Britain's oldest schools has suspended over 40 pupils following a trip where some allegedly drank alcohol. This was reported in the electronic newspaper article from the UK Telegraph retrieved on 11th Feb, 2015 Website:http://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/secondaryeducation/11215185/Dozens-of-pupils-suspended-from-top-private-school-for-drinking.html Drinking alcohol makes people lose their mind and do many bad things. So if we let students leave school for lunch, they go out and drink some alcohol with their friends and they could not remember the way back to school. But if they do come back to school and are still drunk, they could hurt somebody at school. It’s bad, right? I know you don’t want this to happen to your child.
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Now, a lot of kidnaping is happening in this world. The kidnapper doesn’t think wisely although they are old. Sometimes the kidnapper steal kids as young as 3 years old to sell. How would you feel if it happened to your own members of your family? So this is also one reason that the students should not leave school for lunch! http://articles.latimes.com/2011/apr/03/local/la-me-chowchilla-kidnapping-20110404, Thirty-five years ago, three young men from wealthy families kidnapped a bus full of 26 schoolchildren and their driver in this San Joaquin Valley community and entombed them in a rock quarry. The Website article from the Los Angeles Times retrieved on 11th Feb 2015
In Thailand, students leaving school can be at greater risk because there are many murderers. They want to steal the children and sell to sardonic people. Sometimes they cut body parts and sell… Do you want that to happen? For example, If you child went out school to go eat lunch and they was 1 person follow your child and suddenly, they quickly snatched your child up! And no one knows, right? We would only know at the end of a school day. So to solve this big problem, we have to stop letting the students leave school. The only exemption is they leave with their parents.
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Last but not least, the students may come back to school late. Its not good because the students may miss the work to do. And that would also make some problem to the teachers too because if the students did not come at the limit of the times so they will worried that does you get lost, does you have some accidents or anything else and that was not a very good things. MOstly the things that teacher were doing is if the teacher couldn’t call you so the teacher would call their parents and the teacher will told the parents and ask >_< So the parents will get very worried…. And for some parents they may feel very angry because they will saying that “Why you not look at my child?” And you already know right that its not the teacher problem so to solve this problem is stop letting the students went out school for lunch.
Conclusion :
As you can see, If we letting the students leave school for lunch is not very safety most people said that students need to leave school because they need to eat more healthy food (Most of their own reason) But if in my own opinion I think no because if you see now I going to compare it, you think what is more important safety for the students or healthy food for students what would you think? Even though most people don’t see how very dangerous of letting the students leave school for lunch, I want to suggest you now that letting the students leave school is very very dangerous!This was my persuasive essay that I try very hard to write this. I very proud of this because I try to research it and try to think of the picture while reader reading this and type it the same time. Before I going to give to Mr.Mitch I always reread first so I will know what place that it wrong!
