Thursday, December 10, 2015

Second Quarter Science Reflection:

Second Quarter Science Reflection:


    In this second quarter, I had learn 4 main new things. There are Layers of Earth, Minerals, Rocks, and Fossils. For about rocks I had learned about 3 main types of rocks that are Metaphor, Igneous, and Sedimentary rocks. From this 4 main new things I like to learn about Fossils. My partner is Mark, he is a funny guy. I like to learn about Fossils because we get to do many stuff that use our hands. Mark and I chose to do the fossil of a Potato Plant. The information of this are "We can find the Potato Plant mostly in Chang-Mai. The size of the Potato Plant is about 1 and a half inches." This is the procedure we need to do to make our own fossil. 
1st We needed to get one clay and push it down on the table. 
2nd Starting to use toothpick to dig and make a shape of our fossil with details. 
3rd Put the plaster in the place where you dig it out 
4th Wait until it dry out then try to pull it out. 
5th Pour the glue in the place where you dig the clay out to make the fossil's shape. 
6th Wait till it's dry then get it. 
    This is all my procedure. It is fun, I love to do something like this.  

Heads, Hands, and Heart Goals

Head, Hands, and Hearts goal: 
    My goal is to be able to answer the teacher's question out loud and able to share some information with my friends.
    I will achieve this by reading books out loud and then let my mom ask some question to me and I will answer it out loud.
    I will complete this by the end of this semester.


    My goal is to improve my reading comprehension.
    I will achieve this by trying to record my voice while I’m reading the book out loud or maybe a video of myself while I reading.  
    I will complete this by the end of this semester.


    My goal is to be able to join Badminton team next year
    I will achieve this by trying to practice Badminton every day after school at home (If I have time) with my aunt or my sister and try out in the Badminton school team.
    I will complete this by the end of this semester


The work that I very proud of is my work in my reading log. I had completed my second goal that is "My goal is to improve my reading comprehension." I felt I have read 15-20 books already. In my Goodreads I make my goal that was "Read 15 books before 2016" Skill that I trying to master at is my speaking skill. I have improved y reading comprehension already but I need to speak more so my skill was to speak out loud in front of a class and able to share some information with my friends out loud. I felt like I'm not good in speaking so this is the skill I am trying to master at. I will continue to finish all this two more goals that are "My goal is to be able to join Badminton team next year and My goal is to be able to answer the teacher's question out loud and able to share some information with my friends. Also, I will continue to finish my goal in Goodreads and able to read 2 hours and 30 minutes a day. (Because now I read about 2 hours but not every day just some day.)

Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Values Reflection

Values Reflection:
     In this class (Values) I had learned about Bullying, Water Sanitation, and new information through games. Sometimes I have learned new thing from a game name "KAHOOT" It gave me some information about Water crisis and many people that got bullied but stand up for other people. When I chose the answer and I got it wrong and it will tell which answer is correct so that made me want to know more after that I go back home and searched about it more. I like how Ms.Kaitlyn let us watch video through her projector, sometimes watch video is more understand than listen to someone said and it make me be more visualizer in this topic. (example Water sanitation) I also like how Ms.Kaitlyn let us chose our own group for our presentations for example, the Country Investigation slideshow and Bullying Documents. The last thing I really like is when we have to do the Independent work or the summative project thing. It make me to write something that I learned from this quarter and it shows what did I learned truly. :) 

Monday, November 30, 2015

My First Band Concert

My First Band Concert:


    In my first band concert was totally going great. We played 2 songs name Jingle bells and Frère Jacques. I was so excited when I was on the backstage with my friends Kayla, BiewBiew, Theo, Bebe, Jeremy, Titi, Pat, Manu, and Neal. We played many different musical instrument but for me I play Clarinet. I think I concentrate well when we were on stage, I always look at the conductor to know when to stop or when to start. One thing I want to improve in future is to smile more on stage because in this first band concert I made my face going very serious so, some people will think that "It's not fun?" I want to make people want to learn Band and feel fun with it. This is the fun concert I ever played in my life. 



Thursday, October 29, 2015

Mood Art

  Mood Art

   This painting by Keith Harding, represents the feeling of happiness. In this painting it has five people in different colors.. It’s like how I feel when I got the first certificate in sixth grade for citizenship. When the teacher said my name out loud and I started to stand up, I wanted to jump up just like  the blue person in the painting. But, while I walked up I saw my friends clapping their hands out loud and it gave me the beat, so I felt like i am going to dance around the room with my friends in many different poses.

This painting also reminds me when the teacher in P.E. class changed the unit into Basketball. I love Basketball. The teacher said we going to get started with Basketball on Tuesday. I smiled and walked into the toilet. While I changed into the school uniform I dancing around in the toilet like those five people in the picture!

Finally, this painting represent how I feel when I got to know many new friends in my homeroom, Social Studies class, Band class, and many fun classes. This painting also shows how I felt very chaotic too when I met new friends. I like to go ask slowly and talk together the things that was very fun. While I talked with my new friends I always picture about I dancing around because I have new friends again! Over all this painting have related to me in sixth grade in many different happy ways.

Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Values Reflection

Values Reflection: 
     This first quarter in Values class I enjoyed doing Peace One Day presentation, and when we need to act in front of the class about bullying. But the hard things in Values class was about following the directions that the teacher said. Sometimes, I always forgot to listen to the teacher and when the teacher said, "Let's started" I don't know what to do! The link below is our Peace One Day work and Magazine by ChingChing, Namphueng, and me. 
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1js23OwGdWH3OSyS1qi0AOyCEhshhuldosEpVGI0bb98/edit#slide=id.p
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KkYEWfoTr-hXyLetwXy3JBaAZ7J22-H82baPbQX1V0Q/edit
     The easy things for me in Values class was when we need to work on the Magazine and when we need to act in front of the class. It made me feel more confident and stop being shy. But, one thing I want to improve is try to share my ideas out loud. Every time when the teacher asked for the ideas I just sat there and scared that I'm going to be wrong. I going to improve everything that I didn't do it this quarter. :) :) :)  
     I learned about 4 main types of bullying. 
1.Cyber Bullying 
2.Verbal Bullying 
3.Physical Bullying 
4.Social Bullying 
     For me I think this things were the most greatest thing I need to know. I was not just learn about 4 main types of bullying but I also learned about the useful way to stop the bullying to do that bad things. 






      


Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Social Studies Reflection

First Quarter

 This quarter I learned a lot of new information about early civilizations. I learned about early hominids and how they were related to modern people.. I also learned about city states time, and Hunters and Gatherers time. It was interesting to learn that in Hunters and Gatherers time people migrated all around the world to find a new place to live! I really enjoyed when we presented about Sumerians. It helped me feel more confident speaking in front of my classmates and I learned a lot. I like when we watched the videos because it helps me picture what life was like in Paleolithic and Neolithic times. But, the hard things in Social Studies class is about vocabulary. I don't understand all the word that Ms.Erin said so sometimes I thinking about it. I want to take better notes so I can understand the information more.

Friday, October 9, 2015

Math Reflection Quarter One!!!!

Math Reflection Quarter One!!!

  This first quarter I have done very well in PEMDAS. PEMDAS is the first new thing I have learned it, it's very fun! But, when I do the calculations I need to be more slower than now because sometimes when I calculate the numbers very fast I get the wrong answer. Also, I need to check my work too! I need to work on reading directions too because this final test I did number 6 and number 7 wrong. I didn't read the word DETERMINE correctly so I just write the answer down on the paper that's why I'm wrong. I didn't follow the directions in the test. I need to work on 4 steps to solve word problems because 4 steps very help me for doing the word problems but, I didn't do the 4 steps correctly because sometimes for KNOW I write like Find and it's not correct. Also when I need to write equations for the word problem I did not understand all of the word problems yet.


Thursday, October 1, 2015

Powtoon!!!!!


        This is the presentation about the Order of Operation by Palmie and Sunny. I learned many new things about Order of Operation like about PEMDAS P=Parenthesis E=Exponent M=Multiplication D=Division A=Addition S=Subtraction. But in this presentation we need to work about our sound because our sound is not that loud it's need to get more louder. Palmie and I worked well together we have helped each other work out the script for this presentation together. I want to do things differently than this and that is I want to change the expression to be more harder than this because it's make us think deeper and understand more better!

Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Possible Goals:

Possible Goals:
    
    My goal is to be able to answer the teacher’s question out loud.
    I will achieve this by reading books out loud and then let my mom ask some question to me and I will answer it out loud.
    I will complete this by the end of this semester.

    My goal is to improve my reading comprehension.
    I will achieve this by trying to record my voice while I’m reading the book out loud or maybe a video of myself while I reading.  
    I will complete this by the end of this semester.

    My goal is to be able to join Badminton team next year
    I will achieve this by trying to practice Badminton everyday after school at home (If I have time) with my aunt or my sister and try out in the Badminton school team.
    I will complete this by the end of this semester

Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Week 3 - 2 Day of Summer School

Week 3 - 2 Day of Summer School: 
Thai Cooking Art class: 
   This is the picture of Som-Tum that I had made with ChingChing, MeiMei, and Apple. We separate in 2 groups 1 group for no chilli and another group is for half of a chilli. I'm in a half of a chilli group.... I was the person who using something like pestle mortar  (Maybe not sure how to call) For our group we like to make it more sour and more.....It's very yummy!!!  



Science Reflection: 
     For today in Science we need to making a boat with a recycle materials. For Apple, and I first time in the paper we just thinking we going to use just the aluminium foil. But Mr.Matt said maybe you could use a water bottle and stick it together with the aluminium foil boat. Mr.Matt said that we going to test this tomorrow but I'm not there tomorrow so I very very sad :( But I think Apple can do it. 


Monday, June 22, 2015

Week 3- Day 1 of Summer School

Week 3 - Day 1 Summer School: 
Science Reflection: 
     For today we separate like girls and boys class. Today my partner is Apple. Today our task is to design a nice floating boat with any recycled materials. Apple and I have thought that we're going to use a aluminium foil and maybe some plastic plate under it too. ( First Apple and I thinking that we going to use just only a aluminium foil but Mr.Matt  said that the aluminium foil is light and it's could break down or maybe we could say it's could split out in 2 piece) Also we have 10 minutes more left Mr.Matt told us to do a reflection so I moved to the other place and doing reflection and listen with music too!!! >_< 




Friday, June 19, 2015

Week 2 - 5 day of Summer School

Week 2 - 5 Day of Summer School: 
Science Reflection: 
     For today we did like a bit more writing and it's like answer the question from the investigation that we have done yesterday...That's was about EGG DROP!!!!! But I think that my drawing was very very bad but it's still make sense.  After everybody done with this sheet of paper, Mr.Matt said that we could do anything but not play games and JJ invite me to play nitro type but first I thought that we could not play so JJ asked Mr.Matt for me could we played nitro type so we could play and I am very happy for today that we don't have to do any investigation....
Now everybody finish with that sheet of paper!!!!
Thai Cooking Art Class Reflection: 

     Today we need to do our own menu but for the ingredients it's need to be the food that have left over in the refrigerator too !!! So my groups (MeiMei, ChingChing, Sari, Apple and Me.) thought that we going to do Strawberry Smoothie Yogurt and Fried Rice with a tomato for decorating the plate. Apple is the person who decorating the plate. I am the person who need to prepare the ingredients, ChingChing and Sari is the person who doing a Strawberry Smoothie Yogurt. Finally Meimei is the person who cooked the Fried Rice. Also you know that my group already did Fried Rice but this time is more yummy.....!!!!



Thursday, June 18, 2015

Week 2 - 4 day of Summer School......

Week 2 - 4 day of Summer School..
Science Reflection: 
     Today our task was to make a egg parachute. It's was very fun.....My group members is Nick, Daniel and me Sunny. We took two days to do this task/experiment. We design our egg drop by we thought that if we not making any protection for the egg when we let the egg drop it's going to break. So Nick thought and told Daniel and me to use all the straws that we had to make a protection for the egg. Nick also thinking that maybe it could long about 7 centimeters and have about 9 straws and stick together then we got one side of the protection of the egg!!!! But also I think that our group is the smartest because first time MR.MATT said that we could have just only one egg..:( So Nick, Daniel, and I thought that let keep it with MR.MATT so it's safe :). Today I have learned many things from this experiment I have learn about drag it's like when we doing about the paper airplane. Also I learn that the parachute make the egg falling down slower than we let the egg falling down with no parachute!!!! I learn this things because when MR.MATT cut the parachute out and we let the egg falling down and all the group that have let the eggs falling down is all broke!!! That's how I learned.....That time I felt very sad 



P.E Reflection: 



 Today in P.E class I thought that Mr.Comson had said that we need to continue doing after Grade 8 maybe not sure....Mostly for our class we helped to fixed all the thing that Grade 8 had done wrong and something they had not finish yet too. First time we tried to tied all the bamboo together...We tied it all together tightly that no one will get it out but it's not a dead lock it's still can get it out but a bit harder. After we finished tied all this up Mr.Comson called everybody to go sit down in front of him. Suddenly Mr.Comson told us that we need to untied this up in 25 minutes. So when Mr.Comson said started my friends and I start to untied all this up. But also Mr.Comson said be careful of this bamboo because it's very sharp.>_< Also, one thing I going to tell you that sometimes a naughty boys have something to do like this they also helping and happy while doing it too.....It's very very fun....












Wednesday, June 17, 2015

Week 2 - 3 day of Summer School....

Week 2 - 3 day of Summer School....!
Thai Cooking Art Class: 

     Today in Thai Cooking Art Class we were doing Carrot Flower Crafting and Green Onions Rolling. (That's what I called) For today we have 5 different materials that were 3 different types of knife if you could see in the picture and 2 pieces of carrot and 1 pieces of green onion. For my green onion I have around 5 leaves. I very very like this class for today!!!!! First time while we were watching the video some boys making a boring sound but when we going to crafting the carrot the boys's face is so exciting.!!!



P.E Reflection: 
     For today was also fun.......We were doing FRIED EGGS it's very very yummy. Also, today we were doing our own Fried Eggs too. Also it's also funny that Top asked Mr.Comson that could he had one egg for Science (It's because he broke one in Science Lab and Mr.Matt said we could had just only one) so we all laugh at Top. :) But first time Mr.Comson show us how to do it too but it's also dangerous too!!!!

Tuesday, June 16, 2015

Week 2- 2 day of Summer School

Week 2 - 2 day of Summer School: 
Science Reflection: 
     This is the picture in Science Lab today!!!!!! For today I stay with Ching Ching,  and Apple.  For our group we get the question that was Do different liquids freeze at the same rate??  And after that we need to write a Hypothesis, Procedure, and a materials. For my group we thinking to get Soda, Water, and Milk. Finally we put all of this into the refrigerator then on 12:40 I need to go check and write down the observation of these 3 different types of liquids. 



Thai Cooking Art Class: 
     Today we making a fried Rice. I stay in the same group but still I will tell you my group members they were Apple, Sari, ChingChing, Meimei and me!!!! But today I feel a little bit bad because first time Sari and Apple job is to cleaning up, ChingChing job is to decorate dish, and Meimei cooking and for me I cutting the vegetables. But today for the person who decorating dish need to doing the carving thing but ChingChing don't know so we switch job and so Apple said she want to decorate dish so first time I thought ChingChing and Apple going to just switch each other job but it's not. Apple is a decorate person and ChingChing doing my job. For me it's very bad idea because I thought that we just switch their 2 jobs but it's okay I can do anything....

Monday, June 15, 2015

2 Week of Summer School

2 Week of Summer School!!!!
Science Reflection: 



This is the poster that Apple and I have done for Science today. It's very fun but while I doing this I thought that I did it wrong because everybody have a title for the poster but for my poster we don't have a title so I asked FOURTH group and asked that do we have to write a title? and Fourth said no just some group that write a title so I feel like happy. (I go asked them because Apple and I already put the marker the question already.......>_< 


Thai Cooking Art class:
     For Thai Cooking Art Class today we using Knife, Cucumber, and a Tomatoes. I really really like the things I have done today let's look at the picture. Do you know that for the tomatoes it's very hard to do we need to get the tomato's skin out then roll and roll. But wile we getting the tomato's skin out we need to make it not too thick  and not too light too. But I can do it I very very happy for me it's very very beautiful hehe. For me I think for the cucumbers it's more harder because the knife (I don't know how to call but it's look like knife) is very sharp if just get a little bit on a cucumber it's suddenly have a line on the cucumber and not look beautiful already.....

P.E Reflection : 
     This is the picture in P.E Class. Today in P.E class we doing Orienteering half of school. Truly, in my group we have just 1 more left then we done but the time up.:((( In my group we have 3 people that were Fourth, Friend, and me Sunny!!!!! Today is the best day for me it's very very fun I hope that we will have time to play Orienteering again. Love love today P.E Class.                          

Sunday, June 14, 2015

Day 5 of Summer School

Day 5 of Summer School!!!!
Language Art Class Reflection: 
     This is the picture in Griffith Library. For Language Art Class today before we going to go to Griffith Library we played 3 games before we going....IT'S WAS VERY FUN!!!!!!!! We were playing Sparkle, Numbers (The game we played with Mr.Matt) and Pow (The game we played in Elementary School) After we finished playing all this game Ms.Mandeline (Don't know how to spell) told us that Ms.Tony want us to get around 3 books to read at home so we walked together to Griffith Library. It's took a very long time to find the book. Also I don't know which level I am in Griffith Library too...! 

P.E Reflection: 
This is the picture while I was in P.E. class...>_< In P.E. class today we doing something on our foot!!!!! It's like when we get hurt on our foot we can use this purple thing (I don't know how to call this purple thing but mostly they sell like a pink+brown+orange mix together color.) First time I try to do this I cannot do it so Asia, ChingChing, and Fourth come and helped me to work out. So finally I can do it I show to Mr.Comson and he said it's correct I was very happy that time so I think to myself that when I come home I will show my mom how to do it too. (In my family everybody don't know how to do this so I will show them)

Thai Cooking Art Class Reflection:
     For today you could see that we were very hurried to eat all this food. It's because we think to do Pancake, (Also we eat yogurt too) 



and Boiled egg+Bacon+Pork Sausage but the time is going fast so Ms.Da said we can do until Milk Break too so we doing fast. So that's why you see the picture is going like this way but everybody was pretty yummy about this too lol. 

Thursday, June 11, 2015

Day 4 of Summer School

Day 4 of Summer School:
Science Reflection: 
Today for Science.....we were still doing a paper airplane. But today before we going to make an airplane Mr.Matt show us some website about lift, drag, weight, and force. https://jr.brainpop.com/games/forcesofflight/
This is my new paper airplane. When I try to throw it....it's better than my old one. But for this paper airplane everybody could search in google or maybe youtube and follow the following step. For me in Thai they call จรวจหัวกุด It's fly very very good. 


P.E Reflection:
For today we not learning in Godbout hall but we learning on the soccer field!!! We were eating Marshmallow, Rice, and Boiled Eggs!!!! It's very very yummy......I like how we going to put the Marshmallow beside like the fire to make it a little bit brown and eat it! I ate just only 2 Marshmallow then I ate a rice and boiled eggs. While we waited for the rice good to eat so for today Mr.Comson said we just doing for around 10 minutes I really really like it. Today was a best day ever!!!!
This is the picture in P.E class. (Look at how we make it it's very very yummy.)




Language Art Class Reflection: 
     For today in Language Art Class we made a new paper. For my group we have just only 7 people (count myself too) that were Apple, Sunny (Me), ChingChing, Sari, MeiMei, Friend, and Fourth. Sari and I thought that we both going to do about Sports ( For me I doing about Basketball) But today we not writing it yet.....Today we just only design a title and some decoration on the first page. My group vote for the title to be World News and also we drew a Earth smiling beside this title too. So we also planned that tomorrow we going to starting to write an articles in every every page. 

Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Day 3 of Summer School

Day 3 of Summer School!
Day 3 Reflection:
Thai Reflection:                      
    Today in Thai Cooking Art Class we made Pancakes...! In my group we have 5 people that were Apple, MeiMei, Sari, ChinChing, and me.....Apple and I were doing  a cleaning job it usually not very fun but for me I think I also have something to help my friends already. Also, I also doing another job too that was tasting the pancakes (Very Delicious) The first thing we need to mix all ingredients together first, then we start to put it in to the pan just a little bit so it's not too big. Third step to make a pancakes is decorating a pancakes. Last but not least we eat it hehe. For our group we chose Strawberry Jam for our topping too. It's very very yummy.

Science Reflection: 
For today for Science we making a paper airplane....we have like around 20 minutes to figured out how to make a greatest paper airplane and measure how far we throw the paper airplane in centimetres. In my group I have Apple, Meimei, Daniel, and me..Mine is not going so far but still I feel pretty fun about it too. In my group the people that can throw very far far away is Apple. Someone may thing she new student but Apple also good in many many things too! If you can see the picture above you would see it's like a normal paper airplane but I happy about it already to do this experiments/activity. 

Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Day 2 of Summer School

Day 2 of Summer School...!
Day 2 Reflection:

Thai Reflection:                            
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     This was the picture in Thai Cooking Art Class. But today we were planning to make a Boil rice. Also, in my group I have Sari, MeiMei, Fourth, Apple, and ChingChing. For our group we voted for pork not chicken........But suddenly, while we going to cook..if you see the picture in reality however, the Electric cooker/Electric stove didn't work. So we were pretty sad a bit but Ms.Da said that tomorrow we will make a pancake. So we walked back to Ms.Da class and watched the video how to make a pancake......The video that we watched it just only a short video not pretty long. But still now I still feel exciting to make a pancake!!!!!

Science Reflection: 
    
   For today in Science class Mr.Matt was taught me many things. Also this investigation is very very fun, for my group we have three people that were Fourth Apple, and me. From this result my group members and I knew that the highest amount to drops the Water, Apple Juice, Soapy Water, Salt Water, and Soda on the coin is Water!!! Also for the Apple Juice while I started to dropping some Apple Juice down onto the coin I saw it's a bit like a green+yellow. Finally for Soda I saw it's like have many bubbles on the coin you could look in the box 1. But all of this at the end all of it will totally like pop. I like when it's pop hehehe!!!

Monday, June 8, 2015

Day 1 Summer School

Day 1 Reflection:
Science Reflection: 
























     My task for today is to use the Marshmallow, 4 papers, tape, and the 87 Spaghetti. We need to use all this things to build a highest tower....! Every team have many different shape but for our I would say we have the most stable building but our is not a highest building. From this I also learn something too like that we need to work together, and we need to be creative too. Sometimes I also think that we don't have to win this game/experiment I just think to myself that we need to work together and make it stable with our friends. My group members is Nick, Asia, Apple, and me Sunny!! Also the picture above is also the result of my group too......


P.E Reflection:

     For P.E today I partner up with Apple. We will get one paper and we need to go to the place that it tell on the paper and we need to go to that place. While we at that place we need to put the compass down on the white board.....But especially Apple and I get to do W270 degrees so then we need to put the red arrow pointing to the North way. Finally put the pencil down on the compass and let it pointing to the W270 degrees side then we walk 20 step that side then we write down the thing that we see in front us down to the paper. It was really really fun I like it!!!!! 




Tuesday, March 17, 2015

Persuasive Essay

Students should not be allowed to leave school property for lunch!

Introduction :
Imagine if some students go out from school for lunch and something happens to the students…… who is going to be responsible for this problem? It’s the teachers. Do you want that to happen? :( Every country, they’re having so many criminals that steal children and sell them. I know how sad and angry you will feel right now. Criminals are stealing kids and cutting their legs, arms, head and other parts of their body! If this happened to your child, how would you feel? And most of all, if one of your family members are hurt or dead, how would you feel?Death.jpg




1 paragraph:
First of all, the students can have accidents on the road!!! If that happened to some of your members of your family how would you feel? Sometimes, the students need to cross the road to go to a restaurant, but the road that they are going to cross has no cross walk. So, they need to figure it out by themselves when they need to cross the road.  For example, your child is about to go to Mcdonald and it is very close but it was in the opposite side so, your child need to cross the road by themselves with no crosswalk. And they think that now it’s safe to cross the road so they quickly run through but suddenly 2 cars and 1 motorcycle come in opposite way. One car saw the child run through but they couldn’t stop because they were driving so fast. They then quickly switched to another lane and thus crashed into another car, BOOM! One motorcycle was coming quickly from behind and couldn’t see the child. So when he did a U-turn, he crashed into the child. CRASHHHH!!!!!!! Your child and another 3 person died because of one wrong decision. It’s not good. How would you and the parents of the person that died feel? Now, Although some people may still think that they should let the students leave school for lunch but in reality however, we should not let students leave school for lunch.
THe Website: http://www.thompsons.law.co.uk/road-traffic-accidents/road-traffic-accidents-involving-pedestrians.htm retrieved on 11 Feb 2015 stated that, The judge concluded that the driver must have been driving too fast or failing to keep a proper lookout. The driver was found to be 75% responsible for the accident.
2 paragraph
Secondly  the students could go out of school grounds, drink some alcohol and may not returned to school. One of Britain's oldest schools has suspended over 40 pupils following a trip where some allegedly drank alcohol. This was reported in the electronic newspaper article from the UK Telegraph retrieved on 11th Feb, 2015 Website:http://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/secondaryeducation/11215185/Dozens-of-pupils-suspended-from-top-private-school-for-drinking.html Drinking alcohol makes people lose their mind and do many bad things. So if we let students leave school for lunch, they go out and drink some alcohol with their friends and they could not remember the way  back to school. But if they do come back to school and are still drunk, they could hurt somebody at school. It’s bad, right? I know you don’t want this to happen to your child.
Paragraph 3 :
    Now, a lot of kidnaping is happening in this world. The kidnapper doesn’t think wisely although they are old. Sometimes the kidnapper steal kids as young as 3 years old to sell. How would you feel if it happened to your own members of your family? So this is also one reason that the students should not leave school for lunch! http://articles.latimes.com/2011/apr/03/local/la-me-chowchilla-kidnapping-20110404, Thirty-five years ago, three young men from wealthy families kidnapped a bus full of 26 schoolchildren and their driver in this San Joaquin Valley community and entombed them in a rock quarry. The Website article from the Los Angeles Times retrieved on 11th Feb 2015
In Thailand, students leaving school can be at greater risk because there are many murderers. They want to steal the children and sell to sardonic people. Sometimes they cut body parts and sell…  Do you want that to happen?  For example, If you child went out school to go eat lunch and they was 1 person follow your child and suddenly, they quickly snatched your child up! And no one knows, right? We would only know at the end of a school day. So to solve this big problem, we have to stop letting the students leave school. The only exemption is they leave with their parents.


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Last but not least, the students may come back to school late. Its not good because the students may miss the work to do. And that would also make some problem to the teachers too because if the students did not come at the limit of the times so they will worried that does you get lost, does you have some accidents or anything else and that was not a very good things. MOstly the things that teacher were doing is if the teacher couldn’t call you so the teacher would call their parents and the teacher will told the parents and ask >_< So the parents will get very worried…. And for some parents they may feel very angry because they will saying that “Why you not look at my child?” And you already know right that its not the teacher problem so to solve this problem is stop letting the students went out school for lunch.


Conclusion :
As you can see, If we letting the students leave school for lunch is not very safety most people said that students need to leave school because they need to eat more healthy food (Most of their own reason) But if in my own opinion I think no because if you see now I going to compare it, you think what is more important safety for the students or healthy food for students what would you think? Even though most people don’t see how very dangerous of letting the students leave school for lunch, I want to suggest you now that letting the students leave school is very very dangerous!



This was my persuasive essay that I try very hard to write this. I very proud of this because I try to research it and try to think of the picture while reader reading this and type it the same time. Before I going to give to Mr.Mitch I always reread first so I will know what place that it wrong!